Here’s an encouraging story for all aspiring authors.
A story’s first line is an invitation to the reader. In a few short phrases, the author introduces the subject and tone of the story, creating context and mood. This is particularly true of picture books, where low word counts create even more pressure for an opening line that pulls the reader in. So much pressure can make finding just the right words challenging.
Today, I’m going to show you the transformation of my debut’s opening line. Keep reading to the end for details on a critique GIVEAWAY! (Spoiler: everyone who enters wins!)
Finding the Right Words
When I was getting ready to query the manuscript that became my debut, Pando: A Living Wonder of Trees (illustrated by Turine Tran, out from Capstone on August 1st), I thought I had a solid opening.
The environmentally-focused story, which tells the story of 47,000 Aspen trees connected by their roots to…
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Space, Time, and Raspberries 
Finding the right (write? 😉 ) words is always so important. I wish I was better at it!
I hope you’ve been well my lovely, insightful friend. xoxox ❤
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I have been well, but a little reclusive — not in a negative way, but in a regenerative way. I think of you often and hope you find joy in the world around you. xoxoxo
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“A lot of work for nine words, but finding the right words is always worth the effort!”
Yes, and especially at the start.
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